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Daydreams and Nightmares by ~Tuksha:iconTuksha:



Daydreams or
                    fleeting thoughts.
We share lucid moments: hopes
and plans for a future.

Together.


Kept in this land of sin and lies
by that shadow-faced phantom:
Angel/Devil dragging you into the darkness, preying
                       on the trust you couldn't have avoided giving in dreams.
At night-
mares hound you like thunder.

Alone.


All the pain you keep inside,
desperate to maintain this charade;
your harlequin act,
                           you fool.


Someone we’ve cared so little about,
suddenly becomes the second-
most precious thing in the world;
without You and I

                  There is no Us.
©2006-2009 ~Tuksha
:icontuksha:

Author's Comments

Oh you know.
Just something I came up with for someone.
I think they know who they are.

Comments


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:iconthelemaj:
It's sad when something special simply vanishes. Everyone goes through similar phases eventually.

"dragging you into the darkness" seems a bit cliché, maybe, but I love "As you run at night-
mares hound you like thunder."

--
The fiery windowsills of a setting sun.
:iconl0stwhispers:
There are* no Us.
^^

Interesting... =)

--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.

... Evelyn ...
:icontuksha:
*shakes head at correction*

No, in this instance, "Us" is used to denote a singularity, therefore I felt the use of "is" appropriate.

--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
:iconl0stwhispers:
Ah... ok, I think I get it. ^^

--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.

... Evelyn ...
:icontuksha:
:D
So what did you think of the actual poem apart from that?

--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
:iconkyzalie:
It's good...

--
Love could be the most perfect dream but chooses to be the world's harshest reality.
:icontuksha:
ORLY?

lol

Thanks

Whats up, girl? I haven't seen you around lately...

--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
:iconl0stwhispers:
I thought it was pretty good. =)

--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.

... Evelyn ...
:iconcrazynloveless:
I love it. But you knew that already. :heart:

--
AKA ~007-crazynloveless

take off your -3 armour of "frigid bitch" and ill give you my +4 "phallace of mount doom" baby ;) Sto67 "Lol. You make baby Jesus cry." Miguel

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