Daydreams or
fleeting thoughts.
We share lucid moments: hopes
and plans for a future.
Together.
Kept in this land of sin and lies
by that shadow-faced phantom:
Angel/Devil dragging you into the darkness, preying
on the trust you couldn't have avoided giving in dreams.
At night-
mares hound you like thunder.
Alone.
All the pain you keep inside,
desperate to maintain this charade;
your harlequin act,
you fool.
Someone we’ve cared so little about,
suddenly becomes the second-
most precious thing in the world;
without You and I
There is no Us.












Comments
"dragging you into the darkness" seems a bit cliché, maybe, but I love "As you run at night-
mares hound you like thunder."
--
The fiery windowsills of a setting sun.
^^
Interesting...
--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
No, in this instance, "Us" is used to denote a singularity, therefore I felt the use of "is" appropriate.
--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
So what did you think of the actual poem apart from that?
--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
--
Love could be the most perfect dream but chooses to be the world's harshest reality.
lol
Thanks
Whats up, girl? I haven't seen you around lately...
--
-Chloe closes her eyes as she shits in his lap and drifts back to sleep muttering 'I love you's to him.-
Aaron says:
i'm sorry?
Chloe says:
x.x
Chloe says:
shifts*
Chloe says: lol
Chloe says: oops
--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
--
AKA ~007-crazynloveless
take off your -3 armour of "frigid bitch" and ill give you my +4 "phallace of mount doom" baby
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